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假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:

1.写信目的:2.个人优势:3.能做的事情。

注意:

1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增细节,以使行文连贯;

3.结束语已为你写好。

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Sir/Madam,I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position.The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.Yours,Li Hua

【写作解析】

这篇书面表达属于应用文中的申请信类型,可以按照申请信的思路来写,同时要注意电子邮件的写作需要体现交际性。

首先要进行自我介绍,简要交代写作背景,阐明写信目的。

第二段是文章的主题,要把题干给到的提示完整地体现出来,文章用First of all,What’s more, The most important factor is that 等过渡性结构自然地串联三个要点。同时要注意句式的多样化与高级词汇的应用。

02【题目要求】

假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参比赛,内容包括:

1. 比赛信息;

2. 赛前准备;

3. 表达期待。

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增细节,以使行文连贯。

【满分优秀范文】

Dear Chris,

How is everything going? I have good news to tell you. A volleyball match is going to be held in a few weeks and our team will participate.

As for the detailed information of the match, there will be probably dozens of teams which are going to make a revolving competition. Additionally, not only can the top three teams each be awarded a medal but all the other teams taking part in it will get a reward as well. What will be the most attractive is that it will be a great honor for the top three teams to receive special volleyballs that have the name of the most popular volleyball player on them. Therefore, we must do enough preparations before the match, such as training as frequently as we can.

So excited am I that I can’t wait to join in it.How about you? Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【写作指导】

本题要求:作为排球队队长李华,给队友Chris写一封邮件告知他近期球队将参比赛,主要的要点包含三项,分别是:比赛信息、赛前准备、表达期待。字数要求100左右,考生应适当增细节,以使行文连贯。作文的难度不大,可以灵活运用学过的高级短语和句型,例如定语从句;名词性从句;非谓语动词;倒装句等等。另外要注意衔接词汇的使用以使行文连贯;高级词汇的使用以提升作品的档次。

03【题目要求】

假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参,内容包括:

1. 时间;

2. 活动安排;

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增细节,以使行文连贯。

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Allen,

How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.

The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【写作指导】

今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件,告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。

第二,根据提纲,确定关键词语,如:How is everything going? a music festival,in the school hall,The opening ceremony等。

第三,注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。

【点评】

本文内容完整,详略得当。并使用了高级句式。如:You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival. 定语从句。提升了文章档次。

04【题目要求】

1.交通出行;

2.必备衣物。

注意:

1.词数不少于50;

Dear Jim,

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Jim,

I’m pleased that you’re coming to tour in China.

I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and I’ll show you around. Tianjin will be your next stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed trains to both cities.

Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.

Looking forward to your arrival.

Yours,

Li Hua

【写作指导】

【点睛】

本文内容完整,语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型。that you’re coming to tour in China.和that you begin from Beijing, and I’ll show you around.是宾语从句。where you can stay for a week.是非限制性定语从句。

05

【题目要求】

假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:

1. 表示感谢;

2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助;

3. 临别祝愿。

注意:

1. 词数80左右;

2. 可适当增细节,以使行文连贯。

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【满分优秀范文】

Dear Alex,

Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.

Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.

Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.

Yours,

Li Hua

【写作指导】

1. 审题立意

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写感谢信,人称使用第一人称和第二人称,时态用一般现在时。

2. 谋篇布局

书信格式,称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段,写信的目的,中间段回顾Alex对你的帮助;最后一段表达祝愿。

3. 关键词和句子

根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有:leaving for the United States soon,express my heartfelt gratitude,unbelievable progress,cheer me up。通过词汇铺垫,我们就很容易地行文了,文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。

06

【题目要求】

Directions: Write an English compositionin 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.

上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展,现就展出场所〔博物馆还是社区图书馆〕征集公众意见,假设你是王敏,给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求:

1.简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择;

2.说明你的理由〔从便利性,专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比〕

【优秀范芬范文】

To whom it may concern:

I’ve learned that an art exhibition is to be held and that you’re collecting suggestions on its location. I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions.

In my opinion, it is more advisable to hold the art exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. My reasons are as follows.

On one hand, it is more convenient for people to get to Shanghai Museum which is located in the center of the city. And the museum is much more spacious than community libraries, which provides visitors with a more comfortable environment for appreciating art.

On the other hand, as a well-known museum, Shanghai Museum is more professional and experienced in holding art exhibitions. Its professional security guards and advanced facilities can better protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen.

Therefore, I suggest the exhibition be held in the museum.

WangMin

【点睛】

本作文考查观点论述,题型较为常见,要求对画展的展出场所做出选择,并且说明理由,而且已经提示了可以从便利性和专业性两个角度来分析,难度不算太大,要写好这篇作文,只要观点明确并且言之有理即可。

范文按照书信的形式,首先要提出给收信人,Towhomitmayconcern这里表示的是敬启者,是在读者身份不明时用在信件、通知和证明书开头的套语,也是除了Dearxxx之外英语书信的常见用语。

信的第一段交待了自己的身份,并且说明了些这封信的目的。

第二段明确提出了自己的观点,用了itismoreadvisabletodo...句型,说明“……是更合理的”,常用在提出建议时。段落最后用Myreasonsareasfollows.“我的理由如下”作为一个过渡句引出下面的理由论述。

第【三】四段用ononehand...ontheotherhand...“一方面……;另一方面……”进行连接,层次清楚。在论述观点时连词的使用可以使逻辑显得更清晰。第三段从便利性角度进行分析,博物馆交通更便利而且环境更舒适,其中用到了which引导的非限定性定语从句。第四段从专业性角度说明博物馆的优势。

最后一段用therefore简单总结并重申自己的观点。

07

【题目要求】

假设你是晨光中学的李津,英国友好校将派教师来你校参为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间,英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座。现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:

(1)你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一);

(2)选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容;

(3)希望从中有何收获。

注意:

(1)词数不少于100:

(2)可适当入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;

Dear Chris,

I’m Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thank you for your time.

Yours,

Li Jin

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